"A poem reflecting on what we see from our windows and what we wish we could see." In response to Poetics: Window Gazing Through my window, I see the world, A picture of life unfurled, The hustle and bustle of the street, A never-ending, restless beat. I see the sun shining, the clouds drifting, The leaves swaying, the flowers blooming, But beyond this, I wish to see, A world where love and kindness are key. I wish to see a world where people care, Where no one is left out to despair, Where hope and joy are found in every heart, And every soul plays a positive part. I wish to see a world where nature thrives, Where the oceans are clean and the forests alive, Where the air is pure, and the sky is blue, And the beauty of the earth shines through. Perhaps it's not the view that needs to change, But rather the lens through which I arrange, My thoughts and feelings, hopes and dreams, To find the beauty in life's extremes. So through my window, I'll keep looking out, An
Very nicely done! Change is very difficult for me especially as I age! Perhaps I need to change to your perspective!
ReplyDeleteI feel gratified when my work resonates with my readers.
Delete//Change is very difficult for me especially as I age!// Change is a constant in life, and it can be especially challenging as we age. Instead of fearing change, we can learn to embrace it as an opportunity for growth and self-discovery.
Thank you for your kind words, and I hope that my writing can continue to inspire you to embrace change and live your best life. 😊
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Thank you, Paula. 😊
Deletegreat point of view
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DeleteWise words and lovely rhythm.
ReplyDeleteReceiving a message like this is a true joy for any writer. It serves as a reminder of the power of language, and the impact that it can have on people. It motivates me to continue honing my craft, to create something that not only informs but also inspires and moves the reader. Thank you! 😊
DeleteWhat Merril said! It's a healthy outlook.
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DeleteOh I like the positive perspective on life's "shifts" and the lovely rhyme in your quadrille.
ReplyDelete~Mish :)
DeleteReceiving positive feedback is always a joy. Your message has left me feeling inspired and motivated to continue writing, to keep exploring different forms and themes, and to keep striving to create something that resonates with others. I'm pleased to hear that the rhyme scheme I used added an extra layer of beauty to the poem. But what really struck me about the feedback was the acknowledgement of the positive perspective I conveyed in my writing. I felt a sense of pride and gratitude. Thank you, Mish. 😊
DeleteVery nice rhythm in this dance
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